Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Rough Cut Feedback Reflection

1 comment:

  1. Goodwin
    Notations of looking: Always at the camera.
    Music and Visuals: Actions match music.
    Genre Conventions: Bright, fast and fun.
    Sells Connor as an artist with close ups.
    Amplified visuals and lyrics (Call Me Up).
    Not any particular intertextuality.

    Editing
    Some of the lip syncing is out of time.
    Good use of colour changes through out.
    Editing pace could be faster.
    Could be more variety of shots.

    Camera Work
    mostly steady shots, and wide variety of shots.
    Very creative.
    Interesting due to the variety of shots.
    The head cuts off.

    Mise En Scene
    Variety of props, shoes, glasses and amp.
    Different costumes.
    One location.
    Colourful background.
    Upbeat, Bright lights.

    Creativity and performance
    The creating of the video is good because it's original and unique.
    The performance was realistic and matched the style of music very well.

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